One bit of criticism I have is that the whimsical soft dart (I don't know what its called in English. Or Dutch for that matter) is yellow and, as such, blends pretty well with the scowling orange warrior. I think it's supposed to be a whimsical element introduced into an overly serious image to produce a humorous juxtaposition, but due to the blending colours that aspect of it doesn't really jump out at the onlooker right away. This lessens the effect of the image because the onlooker needs to figure out what's being presented here before the juxtaposition really dawns on them (in the same way that explaining a joke ruins it). I think the dart should be a bit more obviously different.
This is my uninformed opinion as someone who doesn't know anything about art (but knows what he likes).
Last edited by WotanAnubis; 21/09/11 11:51 AM.